该用户匿名发帖 发表于 2009-6-28 01:20   全显示 1楼
Good story.  I agree with the 10th floor's comment.  if you add a bit more what you feel, it will make this story better.  If you add more on describing the woman, this story will be 10 times better.  Anyway, thanks a lot for posting.
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