bllyf 发表于 2022-6-26 02:23   全显示 1楼
情节构思很棒，文风我也很喜欢，作者加油！
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bllyf 发表于 2022-6-26 12:10   全显示 2楼
虽然有了一点绿色情节，但是有了前文的铺垫，已经缓和了很多心理冲击，我觉得是可以接受的。而且如果把ntr情节改了，前文的伏笔就变成漏洞了，更不好。支持作者保留原文。
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