[征文作品] 【色城２０１０校园题材征文】【母亲的遗物】（46号作品）

tlltmwj 该用户已被删除	1楼大中小发表于 2010-6-21 09:54 显示全部帖子 0 除去楼上等人的意见，本文并不是很差。楼主对于袁琳这个女孩的刻画非常好，细致而认真，完美的在读者面前铺开了对袁琳的认识，只是对于袁琳的心理方面有些不足。楼主文章中的对话处理的有些粗糙，显的生硬。
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